Fix it, with the Dialog Doctor!

Some more thoughts about Star Wars, The Force Awakens.
I dont know, why the screen writers did not, spend more time in giving the caracters more depth and backgrund, by using some better dialog lines. You can explain so much, if you set them in on the right moment.
Example – Finn:
He just turned his mind, from one moment to the other, even he was teached by the First Order to act like a Stormtrooper. That was a problem for me, to follow.
Why dont give him an interesting history, just by using some lines. Here we go…
Scene: Kylo Ren finished his interrogation at Poe and appear on the Finalizers Bridge, to meet Hux and Capt. Phasma. After he tells Hux, what he find out, Phasma join the Talk.
Phasma: There was a Problem with a Stormtrooper.
Kylo Ren: FN – Row?
Phasma: FN-2187
Hux: Again?
Kylo Ren: seems you still have to fix that problem, with these FNs, Hux.
Phasma: I ordered FN-2187 to Report in, at the Reconditioning Center.
Hux: Set him under arrest. I order his execution.
Or Kylo Ren vs. Rey, during the Lightsaber fight. There is only one Line what could have explained a lot.
Kylo Ren: There ist more in you. Someone made you forget. But i awake a Part of it when i touched your Mind. You Need a teacher ….
And there are more things they could have fixed in The Force Awakens, to avoid questions.


The Dragons Dawn – Jastin

Fantasy: The Dragons Dawn – Jastin my youtube Kreativ bleiben im Alltag The Dragons Dawn – Jastin Jastin ist der zwölfjährige Sohn


Heroes Diary – Sandra Dix Day 3

Heroes Diary – Sandra Dix Day 3 YouTube Heroes Diary – Sandra Dix, Day 2 A Warriors Thoughts AI Art for Nomads


Heroes Diary – Sandra Dix, Day 2

Heroes Diary – Sandra Dix Day 2 my YouTube A Warriors Thoughts Heroes Diary – German Tag 2 Ein Funkspruch erreichte uns


Heroes Diary – Sandra Dix

Heroes Diary – Sandra Dix My YouTube Heroine of Nomads A Warriors Thoughts German Tag 1 Tagebuch von Sandra Dix Der Himmel

Heroine of Nomads

Heroine of Nomads YouTube A Warriors Thoughts Bookrelease! German Zehn Jahre sind vergangen, seit ich mich voll jugendlichem Eifer und hohen Idealen

Mehr aus dem Blog

More To Explore


Writing a Book

To write a Book Book Author, Warrior, Traveler My YouTube Kreativ bleiben im Alltag Fantasy Dragons – Reading Example German Ach, welch


A Warriors Thoughts

A Warriors Thoughts Aaron Kruger – a NOMADS Protagonist visit me on YouTube German Zehn Jahre des Kampfes, des Leidens, der blutigen

Ai art

AI Art for Nomads

  Ai Art for Nomads visit me on Amazon YouTube German AI ist für mich inzwischen ein sehr guten Werkzeug geworden, um